Comments to Final Report Version 2.3 Contribution by Victor M. Ponce, Panelist September 20, 2005 Suggested changes follow, in order of appearance. Page 3, paragraph 4:      -Replace: The RSM is a significant improvement over the current regional-scale water-management model (SFWMM) currently used by the SFWMD.    -With: The RSM is a significant improvement over the regional-scale water-management model (SFWMM) currently used by the SFWMD. Page 22, paragraph 2:   Replace "language, grammar and consistency of scientific terminology" with "language, grammar, and consistency of scientific terminology" (add comma for readability)

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